Hi Jaycie, I like your hook at the beginning of the pitch it allows your audience to reflect on themselves and think if they have a problem of being obese now or in the near future. You did seem a little nervous which caused you to talk fast and stumble on words. I recommend adding a little more content into your presentation such as what makes your app unique from other weight loss programs.
Hey Jaycie, This was a great pitch. Connecting to the audience at the beginning with a common thought was a great way to draw in their attention for the pitch. Preparing meal plans and workouts in the same place is also a very good feature for people, as these two activities are often done by the same audience. Lastly, the addition of a competitive aspect in the form of choosing the workout is probably the best feature for the success of the app. Allowing users to compete with friends on the app, or even just random users, can be invaluable in maintaining their use of the service.
Hi Jaycie,
ReplyDeleteI like your hook at the beginning of the pitch it allows your audience to reflect on themselves and think if they have a problem of being obese now or in the near future. You did seem a little nervous which caused you to talk fast and stumble on words. I recommend adding a little more content into your presentation such as what makes your app unique from other weight loss programs.
Hey Jaycie,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great pitch. Connecting to the audience at the beginning with a common thought was a great way to draw in their attention for the pitch. Preparing meal plans and workouts in the same place is also a very good feature for people, as these two activities are often done by the same audience. Lastly, the addition of a competitive aspect in the form of choosing the workout is probably the best feature for the success of the app. Allowing users to compete with friends on the app, or even just random users, can be invaluable in maintaining their use of the service.