https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nP2wMjgG_wI
2. All of the feedback I got helped me, I reconsidered some of the stuff I put into my elevator pitch and added some other stuff that I felt would help it as well. The feedback made me take a step back and analyze my pitch.
3. My pitch was essentially the same but I added some words here or there to make the pitch better than it was. One of my comments was about explaining the app a little more so I did that in this elevator pitch whereas my first one lacked that.
Hello Jaycie,
ReplyDeleteI can see some changes you made in this elevator pitch comparing to the first one. You changed the way you worded certain phrases and sounded more energetic. It did seem like you were constantly swaying from side to side. There was too much movement and sounded like you talked too fast. Overall, I did see an improvement compared to the first elevator pitch.
ReplyDeleteHello Jaycie,
I really liked how your elevator pitch immediately grabbed my attention. I also like how you clearly outlined what the problem is and how your app would solve that problem. I think that since your presentation was well under the 90 seconds, you have the ability to speak slower. I think that can help your viewers be more engaged and understand everything that you are saying.